Thursday, December 27, 2007

The Decision Cast

My knee's felt week as I had my judgement. It was like hearing something that was totally unbelievable. I felt as if there was finally something good happening in this place of waiting. A few men dressed in all white approached and escorted me out of the hall and lead me up the stairs to where my judgement will be manifested.

I was taken to a room where I was to abide for the rest of eternity, and in this room it seemed it's size was limitless and everything inside it was changed by merely the power of thought. I looked at the men in white and I suddenly gained the knowledge that this was merely your personal abode in this Eden.

Arc 1

They signaled for me to follow them out the door. I followed without hesitation and I was lead to a place where many people were, they were dressed in plain simple garments and they were enjoying themselves in a place that even felt as if it was gently humming a tune that seemed to constantly lift my spirits. I know now that this is what they mean by Eternal Bliss.

I turned around and looked at the men in white. One of them walked out and began to speak.
"This is but a level in bliss for you shall not be satisfied with mere entertainment, once you have bored of this place you may seek us once more and we shall lead you to where you may begin your climb to true bliss and you will find what it means to feel perfect." he said. With that he went back to the group and they swiftly moved out of sight.

This arc is just an open ended one in case I feel like reviving this or people ask me to. The arc i prefer is the one is Arc 2 which begins now.


Arc 2

The men in white began leaving the room. I payed no heed to them but as soon as they left the room began changing. The way out of the room suddenly shut tight and the walls lost it's individual traits. The room became a place where you couldn't tell which way is which. Even worse the room became dark and the gravity in the room suddenly disappeared.

I found myself floating in disorientation in a dark room, I felt the need to scream but no sound came from my throat. I tried to go for a wall and break it down but I realized that there were no walls that could be reached for they will keep going just out of reach leaving me with hope which is quickly utterly destroyed. Yet I kept persevering.

I heard the wall's shift a bit and spikes shot out of the walls impaling me. They quickly disappeared and left me bleeding. The sudden attack had me screaming in pain trying to cover the wounds. As soon as the pain began to recede the wounds disappeared and a spike impaled me. I could not die nor could I faint. The tortures would always get worse but I knew this hell is what awaited me for what I have done in life and this is how I shall wait and suffer till I may be granted Eternal Bliss for my life was judged and it was deserved that I would be tormented till repentance.

For now it may seem like a far off dream but in my heart the hope for Eternal Bliss shall never leave and I shall persevere in this hell of mine.

Maybe will continue this depending on how the reaction to it is. Either arc's would work.

2 comments:

Ma-El Ray Tan said...

Arc 2.

Elethor said...

It angers me that I wrote this, The imperfection. GAH